Monday, September 15, 2008

Suprise Suprise

Whenever we are given assignments, I always think I did an excellent job.

Then I receive the corrected draft. Once again, I'm bummed.
There are always many red inked notations from my teacher.
I'm tired of satisfactory work.

Here's my problem, I have grammatical errors, way to many.
It's as if I didn't do a spell check after typing. I need help.

Help?

4 comments:

  1. Don't worry, it's only the first draft! We will all get better soon.

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  2. I'm can help, if you want. =)
    Having another point of view, especially from a classmate with similar problems, will add to a triumphant paper!

    =)

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  3. Hoi Loi!

    No Surprise to me. I always have that positivity in me. Having your hopes up high is not a bad thing, it means you are positive and look forward to the good. Some people don't think so. But that's how I look at it. Don't worry! Keep that confident up high and don't let nobody bring you down.

    Maria

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  4. Well it is the first draft so I think everyone probably has as many red marks on their paper as you. Don't feel bad we are all on the same boat.

    Rhea Francisco
    September 20, 2008

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